Good, but you can do better.
Narration aside (I didn't care for it and would have preferred you told this story without words, a task I think you would have been up to), this simply didn't have the coherence of your other pieces- it was lopsided and awkward in its flow, and the animation and art itself seemed below your usual standard. That's not to say that these things were not amazing anyway, but I feel like you neglected to tell a good story here.